3.give your point of view
大体意思:
网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;复杂句采用很棒;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
From the picture we can see that so much people are playing computers on the net,but they doesn't notice other around them. With the development of science and techolodge,more and more people like use internnet to connect with others.these can help people to connect with far-distance and long time no see friends,but it has a disadvantage,we always use internet instead of chatting with friends face by face.it discreas our diatance. In my opion,the internet help us much in the daily life,but it also discreas our distance,so we should use internet in need not use internet everytime,internet sometimes like a drug,so we should far away the internet.communicate with families and friends more.