文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累;增加一些从句的使用。
i have very good friend. she have a big black eyes .she have long black hair.she is a beautiful girl .she likes sing and dance.she like read books and draw.my friend is a fat and short .she mather and my mather is good friend .she like a bear and mouse.