文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累;句式偏短,建议加强复杂句的使用。
I have very good friend. She have a big black eyes .She have long black hair.She is a beautiful girl .She likes sing and dance.She like read books and draw.my friend is a fat and short .She mather and my mather is good friend .She like a bear and mouse.