不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;从句数量不足。
I have very good friend. She has big black eyes.She has long black hair.She is a beautiful girl.She likes sing and dance.She like read books and draw.my friend is a fat and short .She mather and my mather is good friend .She like a bear and mouse.my best friend.Out class very like she.