加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
I have very good friend. She has big black eyes.She has long black hair.She is a beautiful girl.She likes singing and dancing.She likes reading books and drawing.my friend is a fat and short.She mather and my mather is good friend.She like a bear and mouse.my best friend.Out class very like she.