小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

I have very good friend. She has big black eyes.She has long black hair.She is a beautiful girl.She likes singing and dancing.She likes reading books and drawing.my friend is a fat and short.She mother and my mother is good friend.She like a bear and mouse.my best friend.Out class very like she.