十一期间(National Holiday),你的同学晓璐邀请你到他家乡做客。你受到了他们一家人的热情款待,并且参观了很多漂亮的名胜古迹。请写一封感谢信给你的同学,主要包括如下内容:
1.感谢同学的热情邀请;
2.对他及家人的热情款待表示感激;
3.表达他家乡的美景给你留下了深刻的印象;
4.再次感谢他们一家人,并真诚地邀请你的同学到你家里做客。
【精析】这是一封威谢信。首先要注意信的格式,而且需将题目要求的四项内容一一列出,内容并不复杂,可以不使用完整的句子。其次要尽量表达出自己的感谢之情。
文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;结构不严谨,行文不流畅;请注意分段;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Dear Xiaolu, I must write and thank for your having invited me to your home during this National Holiday. I am very grateful for the hospitality you and your family showed to me. Your hometown leaves a deep impression on me. I appreciated very much your efforts in making my stay as pleasant as possible. Thanks again for everything you and your family have done for me ! Please come to my home if you have time. Your sincerely, Xiao Dong