小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have very good friend. She has big black eyes.She has long black hair.She is a beautiful girl.She likes singing and dancing.She likes reading books and drawing.my friend is a fat and short.her mother and my mother are good friends.She likes a bear and mouse.my best friend. Out classmates all like her very much.