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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇基本功不错，高级词汇表达灵活熟练；作者在句法层面做的很棒。
Progress of human beings recently Man has made dramatic progress on all kinds of areas in the recent 100 years including technology,education,and medical methods,etc.various progress not only changed our ways of living drastically but also alarmed us potentially in some social hotpots,which cause many people's worrying that whether we do have gotten progress or not. At first, never shall we deny the progress which has made a great contribution to our society,for instance,we can not live without electricity nowadays because of amounts of facilities have provided great convinence for our daily life,such as computers,refrigerators,television and so on.all of this amenities were even fantasies 100 years ago.What's more,the progresses in political areas are also significant,such a great number of colonial countries got off the control of other empires,which indeed accelerates the process of democracy and repay millions of people with freedom.Therefore,huge progresses we have truly made. However,there are also tremendous drawbacks appearing during our process.For example,numberless of the rainforests have been destroyed,which is the priceless trasure of our human being,what's more,air pollution,water pollution...all of these environmental issues have come over us step by step.besides,the increasing number of olds also pose a threat to our industrial process,which reveal the false policies that we have made.to conclude,amounts of deficiencies are awaiting for us to correct. As far as i am concerned,not only should we be proud of the improvements we have achieved,but also we ought to aware of the potential threats no matter about our environment or social affairs since the sustainable development should be our final aim to pursue.
