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高级词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；全文结构较为严谨。
It is well-known that Money plays an improtant role in our daily life. With the development of economy in our country, more and more people pursue a better quality of their life. Meanwhile, the financial disparity between the rich and the poor more and more increase. Why it comes into being. I believe that it is a indispensable reason that the disparity affects friendship. Children in the rich family that have more the chance to reach more quality education have the different outlook of knowledge and level of knowledge with the other in the poor family, which induce the difficulty of communication or even worse and then influence their friendship. Besides, in real world, children coming from a rich family usually trend to build a good relationship with children in a family of the same financial level. So, it also affects the relationship coming from the different financial family. Above of all, the financial disparity can influence the friendship. In actually, many research survey also may show that result. In the era of rapid development, we should deal with that worse relationship when we improve the quality of our life. that good relationship can help us to success more easily.
