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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

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Dear Kris, It was the Ruby lights warmer approval sample that detained in customs. I confirmed DHL in abandon the package because you have sent us the other sample. DHL want to charge the package express cost, please confirm it to Carmen. As per our phone conversation , please be informed that the shipment is held at Shengzhen airport Customs due to UNDERVALUED. Shipment was considered as IMPORT PERMIT require And consignee has applied ABANDON directly with Customs without notifying DHL . Since consignee is unable to provide such IMPORT PERMIT. In this case, Returning request cannot be made with local Customs. Please find fill in the attached abandon confirmation letter before 21 AUG 18:00 and attached the AWB for your reference Thanks

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