小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

He's Tom,he's a boy .Tom is strong.He's good at PE and chinese. Bue Tom doesn't do well in Math.He love on saturday play basket ball and play football 、run .This is my friend.I like play with him very much.He has a small nose in his face.He is so cool!All of our classmates love him.