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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
Recently,blog seems to gain more and more popularity among middle school students,most of whom have thier own blog.And this raises a storm of discussions.On the one hand,blog,as we all know,is a great way to present our good images to the people from throughout the world.However,on the other hand,handling things about it can really cost so much time that a large proportion of teachers and parents worry about the students'schoolwork. As far as I am concerned,I agree with the former opinion on the whole.First of all,opening a blog means a responsibility which we have to take for our words,pictures and so on.Another reason why I support blog is that we sometimes need to put a burden down and via blog we can express what we want to say.More importantly,we are able to develop the ability to express and solve problems. All in all,as every coin has two sides,blog has advantages and disadvantages.Therefore,we cannot blame it for a little flaw,can we?
