行文流畅,但衔接词比较少;注意句式在文中的变化,加强一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累。
My new teacher from Canada.She is a woman.She has big and blue eye .She very beautiful. Oue class very popular.She start a family. She has short and black hair.She likes animal is dog. She likes blus.She likes listen to music. She has a happy family.She is out english teather.She likes see a film.