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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71627
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写。

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first,i am chinese .the first place i want to go is great wall! it is so beautfull!the second one is dahuaishu,it is stand for my hometown! i think my frieng will like my hometown !Beijing is the capital of China with a long history. There are lots of places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, and the Summer Palace and so on. Since it lies in the north of China, the winter here is long and it snows sometimes. Autumn is the best season in Beijing, for it is neither too cold nor too hot. One of the most famous traditional foods is Beijing (Roast)Duck. The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. By hosting the Olympics, we”ll have the chance to let the world know more about China and Beijing. So, come to Beijing and you”ll enjoy it.

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