高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport is football. By chance,I fall into this sport.On my home way,I pick up a soccer and play it with my firend.And I love this sport. Now I usually training and have a game with my classmates.My favorite football player is Beckham. He is an English man. I have a wish is become a professional football player. I believe someday my wish will achieve.