行文流畅,但衔接词比较少;复杂句的使用不是很丰富;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累。
My new teacher from Canada.She is a woman.She has big and blue eyes.She very beautiful. Her our class is popular.She gave birth to first child. She has short and black hair.She likes animal is dog. She likes blus.She likes listen to music. She has a happy family.She is out english teather.She likes see a film.