句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累。
My new teacher from Canada.She is a woman.She has big and blue eyes.She very beautiful. Her our class is popular.She gave birth to first child. She has short and black hair.Her favorite animal is a dog. She likes blus.She likes listen to music. She has a happy family.She is out english teather.She likes see a film.