字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
In accordance with what is detailedly demonstrated in the above table,we can observe distinctly that how different modes of travel changed in England in 15 years spanning from 1985 to 2000.In general,the modes are classified into two kinds in terms of average miles travelled per person per year:one enjoyed rising popularity while the other decreasing. The travel modes which gained popularity in the period included cars,long distance buses,train,taxis and others.Cars remained top among the modes in the 15 years,with its average miles increasing considerably from 3199 in 1985 to 4086 in 2000.Long distance buses and taxis seemed to be warmly welcomed by travelers,so average miles travelled in the two modes almost tripled. Travels by walking,bicycles and local buses lost traveler's favor in the one and a half decade.Average travelling distance by local buses suffered the biggest decrease,dropping from 429 to 274,whilst the number of miles by walking and bikes fell mildly from 255 to 237 and from 51 to 41 respectively.Despite the decreases however,the total miles travelled grew from 4740 to 6475. Generally,the total travelling distance in the country grew in 15 years when cars,long distance buses,trains,taxis and other modes of travel were more popular and walking,bicycling and local transportation less popular.