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My new teacher from Canada.She is a woman.She has big and blue eyes.She very beautiful. Her our class is popular.She gave birth to first child. She has short and black hair.Her most favorite animal is a dog. She like blue.She like listen to music. She has a happy family.She is out english teather.She likes see a film.