文中从句的数量太少;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
My new teacher from Canada.She is a woman.She has big and blue eyes.She very beautiful. Her our class is popular.She gave birth to first child. She has short and black hair.Her most favorite animal is a dog. She likes light blue.She likes listening to music. She has a happy family.She is out english teather.She likes see a film.