单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
My new teacher from Canada.She is a woman.She has big and blue eyes.She very beautiful. Her our class is popular.She gave birth to first child. She has short and black hair.Her most favorite animal is a dog. She likes light blue.She likes listening to music. She has a happy family.She is out English teacher.She likes see a film.