能够运用简单的从句,但不熟练;全文结构较为严谨;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,对拼写检查也要重视。
My good friend's name is Lili.she likes to eat apple.her eyes very big and nice.we also play a joke.she is able to swim.her mom abandon lili since she was born.but she a very happy.she just help others.I like her very much.i need she can happy and nice.i need she can happy and nice..i need she can happy and nice..i need she can happy and nice.