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Yesterday I heard of from my classmate that a new teacher will come to our class to teach English. I was so exciting because I want to learn English. So, I just waiting for the date coming in soon. and This morning I saw a new teacher was tanding by the outdoor of the class. I came to her and asked wheather she is our English teacher. She answered me with kindly smile and say you sill know this soon.