文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Yesterday I heard of from my classmate that a new teacher will come to our class to teach English. I am so exciting because I want to learn English. So, I just waiting for the date coming in soon. And this morning I saw a new teacher was tanding by the outdoor of the class. I came to her and asked whether she is our English teacher. She answered me with kindly smile and say you sill know this soon.