文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨。
Yesterday I heard of from my classmate that a new teacher will come to our class to teach English. I am so exciting because I want to learn English. So, I just waiting for the date coming in soon. And this morning I saw a new teacher was standing by the outdoor of the class. I came to her and asked whether she is our English teacher. She answered me with kindly smile and say you sill know this soon.