文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨。
Yesterday I heard of from my classmate that a new teacher will coming to our class to teach English. I am so happy because I want to learn English. So, I just waiting for the date coming in soon. and this morning I saw a new teacher was standing by the outdoor of the class. I came to her and asked whether she is our English teacher. She answered me with kindly smile and says you will know this soon.