2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

Currently,There is a pheonomi that a large numbers of goods are on their excessive packaging.I think there are three main reasons relating to this probalem. Firstly,because of the fierce sales contest, usinessman are managed to attract people's attention by beautiful packaging.This packaging method promote their sale volume rapidly and bring more sales income. Secondly,some people have some certain demand . The nice packaging is necessary for these people because they need them to be a gift to some respectable guist.They are willing to pay higher for the privilege of nice packaging. In my oponion,I think this action of excessive packaging is not necessary because it will give huge burden either to the customers or to the society.Our country is not so wealthy now.So we have no reason to waste nature resources.We should make use of the limit resources to help the poverty people and not waste on the excessive packaging.