文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Yesterday I heard of from my classmate that a new teacher will come to our class to teach English. I am so happy because I want to learn English. So, I just wait for the date coming. And this morning I saw a new teacher was standing by the outdoor of the class. I came to her and asked whether she is our English teacher. She answered me with kindly smile and says you will know this soon.