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Nowadays,university ranking is extremely widespreaded.People are happy to see that they are familiar with the university rankings. As a coin has two sides.On the one hand,many parents hold that children benefit from university ranking.Because it can help them make a good choice when they choose the university.On the other hand,some others don't consider university ranking is wise,especially for school chief.They express that the university ranking makes some university miss good students.Wtht's more,some students would rather choose the top university than go to the university which can provide the profession they like. In my opinion,we should be in favour of university ranking.University ranking can promote the development of education.
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