小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中拼写错误稍多，词汇表达贫乏。

My have four frieds,this is pengpeng,lili,mingmign,duoduo,pengpeng is old seven,duoduo is old six,and duoduo from Dutch,and lili from Amecrican, she says Amecrica is very beautiful,that some good food , I want go to that a day, and lili is Japanese,and duoduo says Dutch is beautiful too,that Spring alaway, lili like play baskboll,and duoduo like eat, we are all good friends,wo love them.