高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

从句使用偏少；文章组织结构良好；词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用。

Past: home town is surrounded by green trees; river clear frolic; shabby houses, the streets are narrow; people toil life of the poor. Now: tall factory shops; size of the vehicle ride street; deterioration of the environment for industrial development; trees reduce fish disappeared; pollution control when the urgent affairs.