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小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:32浏览次数:7160
要求:
描述我的新老师。
用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

My new teacher My new teacher named Li Hua,she is an outgoing and beautiful lady.In my heart,I appreciate her help in my childhood.When I was a child,I was naughty in the class.Normally,a simple teacher meets this thing that he will seriously speak to you even beat up your hand.On the contrary,Li Hua hasn't took those methods treating me.She teaches me that you should concerned about someone's feeling who living with you,because you are not in oneself individual but in collectivity.So I learn that wherever you are you should think about others feeling.

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