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I have a good friend who is boy and very smart.He's grade table is best good in our class.He is study hard and he always stay at home for learn on week,only on satuerday,we are played in my home,sometime going to swimming in near gymnasium.On sunday,he must wash clothes for he's mother have more time to have a rest who is hardwork.Sometime we are had a walk with he's bebe that is very beautiful a dog in the near park when we are discussed study and dreame,we always are want home joyful.This is my good friend Liming.