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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36945
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分53.5分
评语:

文章衔接手法恰当;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮;文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达,但词汇拼写要更加认真。

用户练习作文:

I have a good friend who is boy and very smart.He's grade table is best good in our class.He is study hard and he always stay at home for learn on week,only on satuerday,we are played in my home,sometime going to swimming in near gymnasium.On sunday,he must wash clothes for he's mother have more time to have a rest who is hardwork.Sometime we are had a walk with he's bebe that is very beautiful a dog in the near park when we are discussed study and dreame,we always are want home joyful.This is my good friend Liming.

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