2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫，有些单词拼错了；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

With the development of infomation technolgy,more and more infomation products are being created,as we all know ,the most widely used representation is the computer.In this 21th centerary,everything and everybody have a close relation with it . fantasticly,as we have the computer ,they make our life more convenient .For example ,in the past ,we go shopping in the shopping center normally ,that would take us so much time,but now,we could not have to drive so far ,just doing this at home,yes!we do online shopping.Also ,as the saying goes"getting the infomation all of the world without stepping out of home",we can learning on the internet,reading any news ,listen to the music we like,on and so many thing. However,computer also takes many disadvantage.Accoding to the recent survey,it shows that over 20% students get absorbed in computer games,which result in grades droping, bad health,and some severe actions.Goverments pay a important attention to it. In my opinion ,computer likes a double-edge sword,we should be they master and use them in proper ways.