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Saving means earning Before making comments on this subject, I want to say my shopping habit firstly. No matter when I earn RMB2000 every month just after graduation or RMB10000 now I never buy clothes in the shopping mall except on the sales season, normally two times one year---the end of June and December because the discount will be as high as 50%~70%. Before paying the restaurant bill, I will find the coupons on the website firstly just because it normally saves me 10~30%. So my viewpoint is clear now. The life including the consumption should and can be better lived and arranged if you make good use of their business acts. At the beginning of group-buy and coupon using, there are some tricks in it. Some businessmen lowered the product quality or decreased the product quantity to tempt the consumers. But they underestimated the ability of consumers. More and more tricky businessmen are washed out. Now the coupon-using and group-buy become normal, popular and well-managed. Why reject them if coupon and group-buy can save you 10~30%? Saving means earning. Someone claim that it wastes time to search sales information. However, if you are careful enough, you can get the sales time easily. Normally in China, the sales season is the end of June and December. Therefore I go shopping during these two periods. The man will be happy because they find that girls' shopping can be so efficient and cost-saving because the girls only shop two times every year and the price is halved. Finally, what I want to say is you will benefit a lot when you have a good plan of your consumption.