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As a chinese probe said,"people should thinking before doing."becacue sometime, if you didn't consider one thing, it will lead to many result. It is unwise to draw a conclusion when you just see one thing or hear that, because in this social, the development of economic is rapid,and it will cause many fake news and thing. So i think it is unwise to draw a conclusion without judge one thing. Several years ago, japan had a earthquake, at that time some chinese people said that eat salt will benefit people health, so many people are very crazy to rush to supermarket to bought many salt with the higher price than, when people encounter emergency thing, they didn't careful thinking, at the end they waste money to bought many salt that. So, i think it is unwise to draw a conclusion without thinking carefully. When some thing happen, we should thinking before doing, or someday we will feel sorry about the thing that we do before.
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