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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;熟练使用了一些长难句;请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写,高级词汇的希望能更熟练一��。

用户练习作文:

As a old saying goes, "it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance rather their heart." With the development of the economy, in this social, their give birth to the new technology, people can change their appearance by go to the hospital to adjust their appearance.But is very easy to change a people face, it's very diffcult to change a peason heart. For example, at this age, many people will make good use of their beautiful appearance to deceive some people, such as on the Internet, and deceive your money, even your credit card.There still have some theif, maybe is a beautiful woman or a handsome man, stole you money while you was relax. To sum up, we can judge a person by their appearance,maybe some person is not very beeautiful, but they is very kind to help people. And people appearance is easy to change, so we should be wise to treat the friend around us,and you will have a chance to gain a rare friendship.

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