2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A Beautiful City in China Dear friend I very miss you.You said you will come to my hometown YanTai.I was glad to hear it.Next i will tell you some good place about my hometown. Frist of all,my hometown the ground of beautiful sea.Sea is so big and make you take relax.On the one hand,YanTai have some the history of place.For example, Dong Pao Tai and Yu Huang Ding . On yhe other hand, Yan Tai have very good apples and you shuold hear it .What's more,Yan Tai's weather is very good. I will very whis you come to my hometown and I will wait for you.