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A Beautiful City in China Dear friend I very miss you.You said you will come to my hometown YanTai.I was glad to hear it.Next I will tell you some good places about my hometown. First of all,my hometown is surrounded by beautiful seas.Sea is so big and makes you take relax.On the one hand,YanTai has some the history of places.For example, Dong Pao Tai and Yu Huang Ding. On the other hand, Yan Tai has very good apples and you should hear it.What's more,Yan Tai's weather is very good. I will wish you can come to my hometown and I will wait for you.
