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字数：300 满分：100分
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错。
Making full use of money Generally,as a student,our money is directly from our parents.we should not only use it with planning not without a finite and also make full use it.Which can us realise how hard they earn money. As a teenager,we are into going out and traveling that have inevitable consumptions such sa eating,playing,housing and so on. At this point, we can share the bills that can be available by group.As we known,there even are some discount and coupons on the internet.In addition, if you have the habit of reading,you do not need to buy book in store instead of reading it online.
