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My hometown is very beautiful which is in Sichuan province,China.Now,I will introduct it for you.I hope you will love it. First,in my hometown,I will take you to play with the water which is on the mountains.I am sorry that I can not tell you the water's name because it do not have the name.If we must call it,it named beauty and limpidity.I am sure that you will love the water very much. Then, I will take you to a place which named Lezhi.Why is there?However,I love there very much.There is no pollution and the air is very frash .The people who are in Lezhi are very lovely .Of course, when you talk with them, you can feel it.Now, I show you the most beautiful thing in Lezhi,barbecue.In Lezhi,the barbecue is very delicious and it is also very popular in China.It is said that food is in China. That's all. My hometown is a very nice place. If you came once,you must not want to go anymore.I think you will have a good time.
