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Now we had to face a problem that emitting a large number of greenhouse gas leads to global warming and sea level higher. The head of each country came to Copenhagen to argue about what they should do for that.the heads of devoloped countries admitted that they would emit less greenhouse gas and give the hands for devoloping countries.And the heads of devoloping countries such as China which urged green economics were willing to join the team. In my views,I think every body should support this activity and try their best to join it.We can do many thing for it such as not waste water and turn down the light after going out. I wish we can solve this problem.
