Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。
The mobile phone in people's life From the picture, people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. The mobile phones have changed the world.They make two or more people have a talk who are in anywhere of the world.But,if people overuse the mobile phone,it's a very bad thing! First,now,when we eat something with a few of our friends,we play with ourselves mobile phone instead of talking with each other.We can talk with each other very happy on the Internet,but we can not have a talk face to face.It's because of the cell phone. Then,we can not think something by ourselves because of the mobile phone.If we have some problems that we can't get out the answer at the moment,we will search it on the Internet by using the mobile phone.Today,if there is no cell phone,the person will die. However,people use their mobile phone to get the information that they think is useful on the Internet.In other wards,they find everything by the mobile phone and use their phone all the time.
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