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In modern society, advanced science and technology have made great changes to our life, but we still value the artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tells us about life that the science technology can not.
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adavanced technology and science can bring great benefits to the human beings,especially in this era of digitalisation and globalisation, while we still need and cherish arts which are indispensable of our mental life. but what exactly can arts tells us about life that science technology can not? i think there are two aspects representing . on the one hand, arts are mental neccesities to the grown people,whose soul can be enriched from them. specifically,people can achieve enormously from arts, such as music ,literature, painting. taking literature for a example. people can not only gain sufficient understanding of different cultures and areas,but also be inpsired by such knowledge and then take some actual actions which make dreams come true. however, science technology is too simple and directive to prompt people to know more details about the life. on the other hand, arts are like the sunshine which lights the whole world. contrary to the cold and bloody technology, people can be warmer and happier because of the charming of arts. for example ,sad or happy love story can make people know more about love, famous novels will teach people how to tackle complex realtionship in reality,while these can never be reached by using the technology. the most critical point why people value arts is that the substitutor of arts is human, no matter who are engaged in this art job, attenders can relly feel the warm and amazing spirt.
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