2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Beijing is the most famer of china.if you come here ,l guss you will like here. on one hand ,beauitful gugong will be seen expess you ,long ago of china history will beat you heart .one the other hands, when you come The Geat wall ,you can breath so fresh air that relaxing you.