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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13030[网页划词已开启]
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
评语:

作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of conserving natural resources and protecting our environment. Firstly,it is the most important that natural resources should be conserved so as to keep sustainable development. As is well known, natural resources are limited and some of them are not renewable. State leaders around the world have realized and acknowledge that we are likely to face a global energy shortage over the next few decades. So we should make wise of natural resources. Secondly, excessive exploitation of natural resource must be prohibited in order to protect our environment. Nowadays, natural disasters such as flood and drought occur more frequently. If we do not stop our unreasonable action, we will suffer severe punishment from the nature.

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