高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

My Home Town I very love my home town, although it is not too big and not too rich ,but I spent a lot of happy children life in my hometown,it is a big impression for the past environment. such as climate is big different in four quarters,spring is not too cold ,all trees and grass are grow up quickly and very green; summer is very hot , but it is a little cool in the moring and evening , we often swim in the river,because the water is very clean;atutum is very cool ,there are kinds of fruit can be eaten; winter is very cold ,it is snow,we need to warm ourselves by fire. now ,becasue the economy development very fast,my home town enviroment have a big change ,there are a lot of new buildings,and a lot of cars run on the street,the street became widen,industry development quickly,the comfortable enviroment was distoried by industry ,the trees discreased ,and fiish missed in the river, so it is very important thing to control pollution。