高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中从句数量不足；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

My Home Town I love my home town,although it is not too big and not too rich, I have happy childhood in my hometown,it is a big impression for the past environment.such as climate is big different in four quarters,spring is not too cold,all trees and grass are grow up quickly and very green; summer is very hot , but it is a little cool in the moring and evening,we often swim in the river,because the water is very clean;autum is very cool,there are kinds of fruit can be eaten;winter is very cold,it snow,we need to warm ourselves by fire.now ,becasue the economy development very fast,my home town enviroment have a big change,there are a lot of new buildings,and a lot of cars run on the street,the street widen,industry development quickly,the comfortable enviroment was distoried by industry ,the trees discreased ,and fish missed in the river, so it is very important thing to control pollution。