文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。
Like confidence,encouragement is also an important quality for a human.Encouragement,sometimes,can give us power to let us fight with struggles. One day on my way home,I heard some terrified scream.I became very frightened.I looked around,but nothing.When I walked past a block,I saw someone was abusing a person.I was very frightened and I even did not know how to deal with it.If I ignored it,I would regret it.Finally,encouragement made me feel powerful.I called the police and helped them catch the person who was abusing just now.After that,I feel very lucky and satisfied because I help a person with my power. As I always think encouragement can help people feel powerful.It helps us fight the difficulties and get out of an unfavorable situation we are stuck in.