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山东济宁邹城一中高一上学期期末英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:27浏览次数:2588
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根据以下提示,结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
Encouragement from a friend plays a very important role in motivating you to solve the problems you are facing.It helps you fight the difficulties and get out of an unfavorable situation you are stuck in.
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(1)无须写标题,文章开头已经给出,不得照抄英语提示语;
(2)除诗歌外,文体不限;
(3)文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
(4)词数为120左右。
       Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times.          
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。

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Like confidence,encouragement is also an important quality for a human.Encouragement,sometimes,can give us power to let us fight with struggles. One day on my way home,I heard some terrified scream.I became very frightened.I looked around,but nothing.When I walked past a block,I saw someone was abusing a person.I was very frightened and I even did not know how to deal with it.If I ignored it,I would regret it.Finally,encouragement made me feel powerful.I called the police and helped them catch the person who was abusing just now.After that,I feel very lucky and satisfied because I help a person with my power. As I always think encouragement can help people feel powerful.It helps us fight the difficulties and get out of an unfavorable situation we are stuck in.

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